It's the End of the World as We Know It, and I Feel Fine
"A barbecue doesn't seem appropriate, given the circumstances," Leona says, nose wrinkled as smoke dances past her head.
"And why the hell not?" I flip the steaks, admiring the sear. Perfect.
"The world is ending, Jack! The power grid is shot, there's no clean water, all medical supplies used up. We're doomed. And you want a picnic?" She gestures toward the front of the house. I glance up. Through the open fence I see the Deslauriers shove another propane tank in the back of their pickup. Houses are abandoned. Cars full of supplies jam the road.
Alatariel: Pelwrath, is the remodel a surprise?
Oct 24, 2021 18:03:58 GMT -6
FoxxGlove: Looks like these Halloween entries are going to be sooooooo close.
Oct 25, 2021 16:20:30 GMT -6
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HDSimplicityy: Tonight I learned that critiquing other peoples' critiques is not a custom in some groups. Is that even true? I did it in school and I think we do that here.
Oct 25, 2021 20:02:22 GMT -6
HDSimplicityy: Im not sure they will enjoy reading chapters of my novel every several weeks with the content.
Oct 25, 2021 20:05:42 GMT -6
Alatariel: I don't think I've ever critiqued someone else's crit
Oct 25, 2021 21:08:46 GMT -6
HDSimplicityy: I mean clarifying your writing
Oct 25, 2021 21:43:06 GMT -6
pelwrath: Day 3 of remodeling, kind of a surprise. She know that not what. Get new electrical covers, put molding back, closet shelves, and start assembling new furniture. Wife is refinishing desk.
Oct 26, 2021 7:34:33 GMT -6
pelwrath: I hope to be less tired and return to scoring tonight.
Oct 26, 2021 8:36:37 GMT -6