Post by gharta on May 8, 2024 16:56:41 GMT -6
Hello! How's it going? I am an aspiring novelists and I want you people to help me.
WARNING! The story below is very uncensored in its details. It contains harsh language, extreme violence, and dark themes.
Some things in the story might offend you people but I can assure you that I am not here to troll or hurt anyone. I am just trying to make stories that are rated R. I want to be one of the few brave story makers who are not afraid to step into very sensitive topics.
By the way, I just want to ask some questions. I still have no fully developed story but I do have an idea for a story!
Anyways, below is my story idea.
The title of my story is "Plaid and Skirt".
It is a horror slasher action story.
My idea is about a modern Russian special forces operative military soldier who was accidentally and supernaturally sent to a very ancient time and that time was during 500 BC along with a modern Slovakian soldier, a modern Swiss construction worker, and a modern French hunter. The 4 of them were accidentally sent to 500 BC Britannia. The Russian special forces soldier is a Russian GRU Spetsnaz commando. He is ethnically and nationally Russian. He is a slavic.
As time goes on, the Russian soldier starts trying to save 3 modern Russian women because he found out that these 3 modern Russian women were abducted by ancient ferocious brutal violent tribal pagan Celtic male warrior savages to be raped and cannibalized by them and the Spetsnaz soldier wants to save the 3 Russian women.
This Celtic male warrior tribe and race of violent pagan tribal warriors are actually the boogeyman villains of this horror slasher story of mine much like how Jason Voorhees is the boogeyman villain of the Friday the 13th horror slasher movies.
The Celtic male savage warrior tribe engages in brutally killing and brutally torturing non-Celts in various ways such as burning alive, skinning alive, ancient pagan Assyrian impalement, etc. The ancient Romans, the ancient Greeks, and the ancient Egyptians fear these Celtic males. The Celtic male warrior tribe also rape foreign women and turn the women into their polygynous harems’ concubines and sex slaves. This is because the Celtic male warrior tribe is not content with their Celtic women.
The Celtic warrior male tribe and race is very brutal. Their main livelihood is piracy, banditry, slavery, and being mercenaries. Other people around them such as the ancient pagan Romans fear them and are enemies to them. The families and clans of the Celtic male warrior tribe also love engaging in blood feuds and brutal clan wars against each other where they will exterminate every single member of their enemy clans and enemy families. The Celtic male warrior tribe is a very fierce warrior tribe with a proud warrior culture.
As for the spetsnaz protagonist, he had no guns, bombs, modern weapons, or modern tools with him when he was supernaturally sent back in time so he has to rely on the survival skills he learned during his Spetsnaz training. He will mostly use stealth and melee weapons against the warrior male Celtic tribe.
His mission is to save the 3 Russian women from the Celtic male warrior savages.
But the most terrifying things of this story of mine are the tartan pattern and the folded pleated skirts of the Celtic male warrior savage tribe. The Celtic male warriors of the pagan Celtic male warrior savage tribe are the only ones who wear the tartan pattern and the folded pleated skirts.
Most ancient people such as the Romans, the Greeks, the Egyptians, etc. in the story fear, are traumatized by, and get PTSD from the tartan and the folded pleated skirts because they are associated with the violent pirate Celtic male warrior pagan tribe. For those ancient non-Celts, the tartan and the folded pleated skirt symbolizes barbarism, violence, criminality, banditry, evil, brutality, rape, cannibalism, human sacrifice, and being tribal savages. It's because most ancient people in this story of mine were brutalized and victimized by the Celtic male warrior tribe and race. By the way, the whole Celtic male warrior tribe often have long hair and are proud of it.
The folded pleated skirts that the Celtic male warriors wear has folded pleats on all sides of the skirts such as the back, the front, the left, the right, and every side. The tartan patterns are used by the Celtic male warrior savages as a design pattern for the folded pleated skirts. The tartan patterns that the Celtic male warriors use are very diverse. They have many different tartan patterns.
The Celtic male warrior savages wear variations of these tartan patterns and these folded pleated skirts. Many of these Celtic male warriors also wear maxi long versions of that same tartan folded pleated skirt and even fight in those very long dresses. When I say maxi long in length, I mean that the skirts are so long that they reach below and completely cover the ankles and the talus bones of the Celtic warrior male savages. Some of these maxi versions are even floor-length.
Some of the Celtic male warriors wear these tartan maxi folded pleated skirts while wearing buttoned white long-sleeved blouse shirts but most of the time, the pagan Celtic male warrior savages are shirtless.
Some of the Celtic male warriors also wear mini-skirt versions of those tartan folded pleated skirts. The mini-skirt versions are very short to the point that only the upper-halves of the Celtic male warriors’ thighs are covered by the skirt and due to this, the Celtic male warriors wear tights that cover their lower legs. The Celtic males also wear buttoned white long-sleeved blouse shirts. Also, the Celtic male warriors have long hair when wearing these Celtic clothing items. What I am saying is that the Celtic male warrior savages look like private highschool female students in uniforms.
Due to the Celtic male warrior savages wearing the tartan and the folded pleated skirts of various lengths such as maxi long, mini-skirt, etc., the modern Slovakian soldier, the modern Swiss construction worker, and the modern French hunter made insulting racist jokes about the ancient pagan tribal Celtic male warriors as being shameless savages who look gay and womanly. The Swiss asked the Russian protagonist if he agrees with the 3 of them. The Russian protagonist didn't answer but asked the Swiss why they think of the Celts as savages. The Swiss laughingly responded to the Russian that the fact that the tartan and the tartan folded pleated skirt are the most fetishized girly teen clothing items and are considered to be the most girly clothing items in the whole modern world despite the fact that the ancient pagan tribal Celtic male warriors created those Celtic male clothing items to be very masculine and warlike means that Celtic males are huge crazy idiots. The Swiss also said to the Russian man that being a barbarian doesn't just mean being primitive but also means being crazy and stupid to the point that what one does doesn't make any sense.
The Slovakian man is even more racist to the Celts. He pointed out and laughed at the fact that the tribal Celtic male warrior savages have "ginger” red hair and act overly macho in an uncivilized savage tribal warrior barbarian violent way yet wear the tartan patterns and the tartan folded pleated skirts despite the fact that those clothing items are the most fetishized girly teen clothing items and are considered to be the most girly clothing items in the whole modern world. Adding all of those, the Slovakian man concluded that the uncivilized tribal pagan Celtic male warrior savages are basically disgusting walking abominations who have no shame about how they look, especially the Celtic male warrior savages who wear the maxi long versions of those tartan folded pleated skirts.
As for the Russian Spetsnaz protagonist, he didn't join the Slovakian, the Swiss, and the French in making racist insulting jokes about the Celtic male warrior savages and just didn't say anything. The Russian also didn't laugh.
As the story goes on, the modern Slovakian soldier, the modern Swiss construction worker, and the modern French hunter were hunted down and brutally tortured to death by the Celtic male warrior savages.
Also, some ancient non-Celts are horrified by the Celtic male warrior tribe due to the Celtic male tribe practicing cannibalism and human sacrifice.
After the Russian Spetsnaz defeated his ancient tribal pagan Celtic foes and saved the 3 Russian women, the Russian male and the 3 Russian women managed to supernaturally get back to modern times.
Then in my story, there will be a scene. This scene is set in the USA. The scene will be about an American teen girl who was being bullied by 2 American public school male students. The reason why they bullied her was because she was wearing a tartan folded pleated skirt which is a type of skirt worn by private highschool female students. She wore the skirt for fun. She is actually not a private highschool student but a public highschool student. She just wants to look like a private highschool female student because she thinks their tartan folded pleated skirts look cute. The bully American boys told her the fact that the reason why they hated the tartan and the pleated skirt was because the 2 boys think that tartan and the skirt are originally the clothing of ancient ferocious brutal violent tribal pagan Celtic male barbarian warrior savages. The 2 boys told her that she looks stupid and disgusting in the skirt which hurt her feelings. The American boys continued bullying her physically and verbally until the Spetsnaz protagonist arrived and successfully and brutally beat up the 2 boy bullies and protected the American girl.
The girl thanked him and asked him why he helped her. He answered that he has a sister who used to be bullied until he scared her bullies away.
Then, a male private highschool teacher arrives and due to the bullying he saw, he told the Spetsnaz protagonist that kids are so cruel. The Spetsnaz protagonist then agrees.
But another private highschool teacher arrives and she has a German boy with her. The private highschool teacher is female. She then told the male private highschool teacher that she really disapproves of the tartan and the folded pleated skirt as part of private highschool female students’ uniforms. The female teacher also said that the reason why is because she thinks that tartan and the folded pleated skirt make private highschool female students look like undignified disgusting violent tribal barbarian pagan Celtic males. According to the female teacher, private highschool female students should look like dignified elegant civilized ladies and not like male tribal savages. The female teacher also said that the tartan and the folded pleated skirt were all invented by and were all worn first by tribal Celtic barbarian pagan males.
The male teacher can't respond to what she just said.
The German boy then responded to the female teacher that tartan and tartan folded pleated skirts look girly teen cute but the female teacher responded by saying, “Back then, tartan and folded pleated skirts symbolized violence, toxic machismo, barbarism, zero civilization, brutality, ignorance, blood feuds, and Celtic tribalism due to some Celtic male savage warriors brutality against non-Celtic races such as the ancient Romans, the ancient Greeks, etc. The tartan and the folded pleated skirt were a symbol of terror and destruction for many ancient non-Celts so what's your point?”. The German boy can't respond.
As for the Spetsnaz, he had a blank reaction and didn't know how to respond. He didn't say anything. He didn't want to respond.
On another day, the Spetsnaz commando protagonist spotted 4 racist American teen boys assaulting and mocking a modern immigrant Celtic teen boy from Great Britain. The Celtic boy was trying to look like a warrior by wearing a tartan folded pleated skirt so the 4 American boys mocked the Celtic boy by saying that the Celtic boy looks feminine and gay. Then, the 4 racist American boys assaulted the Celtic boy. The Celtic boy was from Great Britain and the tartan and the tartan pleated skirt was part of his Celtic heritage. Only males from his race and community wear the tartan and the folded pleated skirt. What happened is that the 4 racist American boys mocked his heritage and told the Celtic boy that all Celts are uncivilized tribal savage criminal pirate thieves who look gay and love engaging in brutal clan wars and family blood feuds. The Celtic boy cried.
As a result, the Spetsnaz commando brutally beat up and scared the 4 racist American boys. The Celtic boy then thanked The Spetsnaz operative. The Spetsnaz operative then told the Celtic boy to never let anyone scare him for who he is. Then the Spetsnaz left the Celtic boy.
That's all the story for now.
By the way, what do you think of the tartan part and the folded pleated skirt part? I like that they are a part of my story because they are very important. They play important roles in this horror slasher story. This is also because those clothing items were invented by and were worn first by ancient tribal pagan Celtic male warriors.
Please correct me. Give me feedback.
WARNING! The story below is very uncensored in its details. It contains harsh language, extreme violence, and dark themes.
Some things in the story might offend you people but I can assure you that I am not here to troll or hurt anyone. I am just trying to make stories that are rated R. I want to be one of the few brave story makers who are not afraid to step into very sensitive topics.
By the way, I just want to ask some questions. I still have no fully developed story but I do have an idea for a story!
Anyways, below is my story idea.
The title of my story is "Plaid and Skirt".
It is a horror slasher action story.
My idea is about a modern Russian special forces operative military soldier who was accidentally and supernaturally sent to a very ancient time and that time was during 500 BC along with a modern Slovakian soldier, a modern Swiss construction worker, and a modern French hunter. The 4 of them were accidentally sent to 500 BC Britannia. The Russian special forces soldier is a Russian GRU Spetsnaz commando. He is ethnically and nationally Russian. He is a slavic.
As time goes on, the Russian soldier starts trying to save 3 modern Russian women because he found out that these 3 modern Russian women were abducted by ancient ferocious brutal violent tribal pagan Celtic male warrior savages to be raped and cannibalized by them and the Spetsnaz soldier wants to save the 3 Russian women.
This Celtic male warrior tribe and race of violent pagan tribal warriors are actually the boogeyman villains of this horror slasher story of mine much like how Jason Voorhees is the boogeyman villain of the Friday the 13th horror slasher movies.
The Celtic male savage warrior tribe engages in brutally killing and brutally torturing non-Celts in various ways such as burning alive, skinning alive, ancient pagan Assyrian impalement, etc. The ancient Romans, the ancient Greeks, and the ancient Egyptians fear these Celtic males. The Celtic male warrior tribe also rape foreign women and turn the women into their polygynous harems’ concubines and sex slaves. This is because the Celtic male warrior tribe is not content with their Celtic women.
The Celtic warrior male tribe and race is very brutal. Their main livelihood is piracy, banditry, slavery, and being mercenaries. Other people around them such as the ancient pagan Romans fear them and are enemies to them. The families and clans of the Celtic male warrior tribe also love engaging in blood feuds and brutal clan wars against each other where they will exterminate every single member of their enemy clans and enemy families. The Celtic male warrior tribe is a very fierce warrior tribe with a proud warrior culture.
As for the spetsnaz protagonist, he had no guns, bombs, modern weapons, or modern tools with him when he was supernaturally sent back in time so he has to rely on the survival skills he learned during his Spetsnaz training. He will mostly use stealth and melee weapons against the warrior male Celtic tribe.
His mission is to save the 3 Russian women from the Celtic male warrior savages.
But the most terrifying things of this story of mine are the tartan pattern and the folded pleated skirts of the Celtic male warrior savage tribe. The Celtic male warriors of the pagan Celtic male warrior savage tribe are the only ones who wear the tartan pattern and the folded pleated skirts.
Most ancient people such as the Romans, the Greeks, the Egyptians, etc. in the story fear, are traumatized by, and get PTSD from the tartan and the folded pleated skirts because they are associated with the violent pirate Celtic male warrior pagan tribe. For those ancient non-Celts, the tartan and the folded pleated skirt symbolizes barbarism, violence, criminality, banditry, evil, brutality, rape, cannibalism, human sacrifice, and being tribal savages. It's because most ancient people in this story of mine were brutalized and victimized by the Celtic male warrior tribe and race. By the way, the whole Celtic male warrior tribe often have long hair and are proud of it.
The folded pleated skirts that the Celtic male warriors wear has folded pleats on all sides of the skirts such as the back, the front, the left, the right, and every side. The tartan patterns are used by the Celtic male warrior savages as a design pattern for the folded pleated skirts. The tartan patterns that the Celtic male warriors use are very diverse. They have many different tartan patterns.
The Celtic male warrior savages wear variations of these tartan patterns and these folded pleated skirts. Many of these Celtic male warriors also wear maxi long versions of that same tartan folded pleated skirt and even fight in those very long dresses. When I say maxi long in length, I mean that the skirts are so long that they reach below and completely cover the ankles and the talus bones of the Celtic warrior male savages. Some of these maxi versions are even floor-length.
Some of the Celtic male warriors wear these tartan maxi folded pleated skirts while wearing buttoned white long-sleeved blouse shirts but most of the time, the pagan Celtic male warrior savages are shirtless.
Some of the Celtic male warriors also wear mini-skirt versions of those tartan folded pleated skirts. The mini-skirt versions are very short to the point that only the upper-halves of the Celtic male warriors’ thighs are covered by the skirt and due to this, the Celtic male warriors wear tights that cover their lower legs. The Celtic males also wear buttoned white long-sleeved blouse shirts. Also, the Celtic male warriors have long hair when wearing these Celtic clothing items. What I am saying is that the Celtic male warrior savages look like private highschool female students in uniforms.
Due to the Celtic male warrior savages wearing the tartan and the folded pleated skirts of various lengths such as maxi long, mini-skirt, etc., the modern Slovakian soldier, the modern Swiss construction worker, and the modern French hunter made insulting racist jokes about the ancient pagan tribal Celtic male warriors as being shameless savages who look gay and womanly. The Swiss asked the Russian protagonist if he agrees with the 3 of them. The Russian protagonist didn't answer but asked the Swiss why they think of the Celts as savages. The Swiss laughingly responded to the Russian that the fact that the tartan and the tartan folded pleated skirt are the most fetishized girly teen clothing items and are considered to be the most girly clothing items in the whole modern world despite the fact that the ancient pagan tribal Celtic male warriors created those Celtic male clothing items to be very masculine and warlike means that Celtic males are huge crazy idiots. The Swiss also said to the Russian man that being a barbarian doesn't just mean being primitive but also means being crazy and stupid to the point that what one does doesn't make any sense.
The Slovakian man is even more racist to the Celts. He pointed out and laughed at the fact that the tribal Celtic male warrior savages have "ginger” red hair and act overly macho in an uncivilized savage tribal warrior barbarian violent way yet wear the tartan patterns and the tartan folded pleated skirts despite the fact that those clothing items are the most fetishized girly teen clothing items and are considered to be the most girly clothing items in the whole modern world. Adding all of those, the Slovakian man concluded that the uncivilized tribal pagan Celtic male warrior savages are basically disgusting walking abominations who have no shame about how they look, especially the Celtic male warrior savages who wear the maxi long versions of those tartan folded pleated skirts.
As for the Russian Spetsnaz protagonist, he didn't join the Slovakian, the Swiss, and the French in making racist insulting jokes about the Celtic male warrior savages and just didn't say anything. The Russian also didn't laugh.
As the story goes on, the modern Slovakian soldier, the modern Swiss construction worker, and the modern French hunter were hunted down and brutally tortured to death by the Celtic male warrior savages.
Also, some ancient non-Celts are horrified by the Celtic male warrior tribe due to the Celtic male tribe practicing cannibalism and human sacrifice.
After the Russian Spetsnaz defeated his ancient tribal pagan Celtic foes and saved the 3 Russian women, the Russian male and the 3 Russian women managed to supernaturally get back to modern times.
Then in my story, there will be a scene. This scene is set in the USA. The scene will be about an American teen girl who was being bullied by 2 American public school male students. The reason why they bullied her was because she was wearing a tartan folded pleated skirt which is a type of skirt worn by private highschool female students. She wore the skirt for fun. She is actually not a private highschool student but a public highschool student. She just wants to look like a private highschool female student because she thinks their tartan folded pleated skirts look cute. The bully American boys told her the fact that the reason why they hated the tartan and the pleated skirt was because the 2 boys think that tartan and the skirt are originally the clothing of ancient ferocious brutal violent tribal pagan Celtic male barbarian warrior savages. The 2 boys told her that she looks stupid and disgusting in the skirt which hurt her feelings. The American boys continued bullying her physically and verbally until the Spetsnaz protagonist arrived and successfully and brutally beat up the 2 boy bullies and protected the American girl.
The girl thanked him and asked him why he helped her. He answered that he has a sister who used to be bullied until he scared her bullies away.
Then, a male private highschool teacher arrives and due to the bullying he saw, he told the Spetsnaz protagonist that kids are so cruel. The Spetsnaz protagonist then agrees.
But another private highschool teacher arrives and she has a German boy with her. The private highschool teacher is female. She then told the male private highschool teacher that she really disapproves of the tartan and the folded pleated skirt as part of private highschool female students’ uniforms. The female teacher also said that the reason why is because she thinks that tartan and the folded pleated skirt make private highschool female students look like undignified disgusting violent tribal barbarian pagan Celtic males. According to the female teacher, private highschool female students should look like dignified elegant civilized ladies and not like male tribal savages. The female teacher also said that the tartan and the folded pleated skirt were all invented by and were all worn first by tribal Celtic barbarian pagan males.
The male teacher can't respond to what she just said.
The German boy then responded to the female teacher that tartan and tartan folded pleated skirts look girly teen cute but the female teacher responded by saying, “Back then, tartan and folded pleated skirts symbolized violence, toxic machismo, barbarism, zero civilization, brutality, ignorance, blood feuds, and Celtic tribalism due to some Celtic male savage warriors brutality against non-Celtic races such as the ancient Romans, the ancient Greeks, etc. The tartan and the folded pleated skirt were a symbol of terror and destruction for many ancient non-Celts so what's your point?”. The German boy can't respond.
As for the Spetsnaz, he had a blank reaction and didn't know how to respond. He didn't say anything. He didn't want to respond.
On another day, the Spetsnaz commando protagonist spotted 4 racist American teen boys assaulting and mocking a modern immigrant Celtic teen boy from Great Britain. The Celtic boy was trying to look like a warrior by wearing a tartan folded pleated skirt so the 4 American boys mocked the Celtic boy by saying that the Celtic boy looks feminine and gay. Then, the 4 racist American boys assaulted the Celtic boy. The Celtic boy was from Great Britain and the tartan and the tartan pleated skirt was part of his Celtic heritage. Only males from his race and community wear the tartan and the folded pleated skirt. What happened is that the 4 racist American boys mocked his heritage and told the Celtic boy that all Celts are uncivilized tribal savage criminal pirate thieves who look gay and love engaging in brutal clan wars and family blood feuds. The Celtic boy cried.
As a result, the Spetsnaz commando brutally beat up and scared the 4 racist American boys. The Celtic boy then thanked The Spetsnaz operative. The Spetsnaz operative then told the Celtic boy to never let anyone scare him for who he is. Then the Spetsnaz left the Celtic boy.
That's all the story for now.
By the way, what do you think of the tartan part and the folded pleated skirt part? I like that they are a part of my story because they are very important. They play important roles in this horror slasher story. This is also because those clothing items were invented by and were worn first by ancient tribal pagan Celtic male warriors.
Please correct me. Give me feedback.
Again. Ugh. Why do these kinds of people always try to come back?
You add them to your profile as you do them around the forum.
