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Valhalla Erikson
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Hell May 7, 2024 18:25:26 GMT -6

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Post by Valhalla Erikson on May 7, 2024 18:25:26 GMT -6

What is your version of hell in your stories? Or how would you personally interprit hell when writing it? For me? My version of hell I'm working on for my story isn't exactly called hell. It is a realm that is inspired by it and it is a place where the damned go to.

It represents almost a reflection of the world my story is in but the more the newcomer ventures into it the more they'd start to notice that something is off. Like it's always dark with no daylight in sight. Or how the moon is a crimson color of red. And its residents embark the worst traits of humanity imaginable. The daemons lord over the residents, treating them no better than cattle or toys to play with and the unfortunate souls selected by them are consumed by the daemon lords and their souls get devoured within them for a millenia.

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saintofm
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Hell May 7, 2024 22:54:16 GMT -6

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Post by saintofm on May 7, 2024 22:54:16 GMT -6

One story I dabbled in and may get back to I want change the hell into basically super depression. You have the fire and brimstone, but for the most part there is an overwhelming feeling of hopelessness. Those that dwell there want others to share in their misery, and often stay as damned souls not from some heavenly decree but they are too proud...too proud to ask for forgiveness and to admit they were wrong.

In what I am converting Warhammer fix into something original, its a parasitic realm. It does not necessarily create, but drags others into it and reshapes it. You ill have demons based on the seven deadly sins, of course, but are often from creature that were manipulated, twisted, warped into something else.

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maninthemansion14
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Hell May 10, 2024 21:23:36 GMT -6 via mobile

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Post by maninthemansion14 on May 10, 2024 21:23:36 GMT -6

Mine would be about a supernatural place where sinners get brutally tortured for eternity by the following supernatural beings:

1. Evil gods
2. Vampiric deities
3. Violent psycho gods who demand brutal human sacrifice
4. Dark Archangels and Dark Seraphims

Also, this Hell of mine snatches evil living mortals that are so evil that when another living mortal supernaturally curses them for their evil ways, the malevolent entities of this Hell drag the sinful evil mortals down to the Hell to be tortured there for eternity.

The Hell is diverse in its landscales and these are those landscapes:

1. Hell planes of shadow and darkness which are black and gray. The fires in these places are pure black.

2. Hell planes made of blood, flesh, and bones.

3. And then the classic fire and lava Hell planes where fire is very strong.

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The tortures in this Hell are so extreme that the mortal sinners who suffered those tortures become monsters themselves who attack and torture other mortal sinners.

The Hell is also separated in these various sins below. Sinners will go to the Hell if they let these sins cause them to commit extreme horrible deeds like murder:

1. Jealousy
2. Egoistic Narcissism
3. Manipulativeness
4. Dishonesty
5. Disrespectfulness
6. Aggression
7. Greed
8. Impulsivity
9. Being judgemental
10. Selfishness
11. Bigotry
12. Lust
13. Anger
14. Gluttony
15. Fanaticism
16. Amorality
17. Being domineering
18. Disloyalty and being a traitor
19. Self-righteousness

Last Edit: May 10, 2024 21:27:06 GMT -6 by maninthemansion14

Valhalla Erikson
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Hell May 11, 2024 0:02:59 GMT -6

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Post by Valhalla Erikson on May 11, 2024 0:02:59 GMT -6

May 10, 2024 21:23:36 GMT -6 maninthemansion14 said:

This is giving me Dante's Inferno vibes. I can dig it.

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